Comments : Eternal Flame (Palindrome)

  • 15 years ago

    by Lu

    Ingrid
    I really enjoyed this poem. The mirrored reflection was amazing and I can only imagine the time it took to pen this delightful piece.

    You have penned this form with excellence.

    Beautiful read my friend!

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job Ingrid on this reflective form of poetry...this is one i have no been able to master yet.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Great job on this form which can be rather difficult! Nice to see you try a new style!

  • 15 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    Sheesh! I love this poem. I can't ever write poems this style. They end up not making sense lol

    I have a suggestion though:

    Hearts entwined
    eternally flame burning
    intensely experienced moments
    feelings transferred soul to soul
    connection felt deeply
    lasting forever
    love

    ^^In the second line i would make flame plural to make it match both sides better like this:

    Hearts entwined
    eternally flame(s) burning
    intensely experienced moments
    feelings transferred soul to soul
    connection felt deeply
    lasting forever
    love

    ^^ Then also read backwards it would be

    moments experienced intensely
    burning flames eternally :)

    Just a suggestion of what i would do!
    It's amazing anyways!

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by GrapeliciousKoolAid

    Wow, that was beautiful.

  • 15 years ago

    by expressivechild

    This is just beautiful, simply beautiful! Wish I can write more joyful poems like this one!