Your right not exactly the perfect rhym lol but who said all poems have to rhym it has good feeling in it i like

*annak*

ps. thanks for the comment on my poem. i just posted a new one called dream on. Check it out

pss. im so sorry to hear about your divorce. if you need someone to talk to pm me. ill be glad to talk

A very nice poem and who cares if it doesn't rhyme? it was still beautiful, i loved it.
keep it up
5/5