Comments : Two nights down

  • 16 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    Last stanza : "two" not "too"

    anyway... i love this poem!
    i respect you very much for stopping self harm if this is true. i understand, it is hard but it is possible - ive gone 2 months now :D and i believe you are stong enough and amazing enough to do it!

    keep up the very good work and all the best x
    5/5
    ~FountainsOfBlood

  • 16 years ago

    by Illusion

    I think "too many more go"
    should be changed 'many more to go"

    and the best part of your poem is the ending . you end with a question mark which means that your search(for answers) is not yet over .

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Simply put: if you can survive one night, you can survive them all.

    i'm here with you honey.