*swoons* beautifical! This one is a bit different...really quite good. Fabulous! There are a lot of lines that are really good. Only thing is it's 'beliefs' not 'believes' but, otherwise, really quite beautiful.

Love the poem its very good and i do think its a bit different too but really quite good...5/5

Love love love it.

I'd have to say this is my favorite part.

"let me get a chance now!
lightning bolts strike as we kiss,
the skies above our love.
let me get a chance now!
a thunder every time we laugh,
about the silly things we do.

Poison girl won't you give yourself to me?"

wonderful job.