This poem is Super-Fab! But i think you got a couple of typing errors #1 "What if kiss the prince, will he turn back in t a frog?" It should be will he turn back in to a frog? #2 "He'll tell you that he loves you and fill your heart with joy!" There should be a comma between you & and, just because it's compound sentence and you've inserted a conjunction so it's supposed to have a comm aso yeah good job! 4/5

Ahahahaa. love itttttt(: all smiles.

Cute!

Wow!!
This poem is perfect.
I feel this way everytime I kiss my boyfriend.
:)
You're an amazing writer

-SRM.

HA HA Yup!! that is the way I felt with my boyfriend to before we broke up!!

WOW! this is so cute... I just loved it =D

"My thoughts became all worried, what if I kiss him wrong?"
Lol, that was my favorite part- your poems are amazing!

Really really good yur an amazing writer and I really like it.. To me it seems like the first kisss kind of thing