I really liked it great job!((5))

Its good but to long

Hmm just a comment on my own thing, its not a poem, but lyrics to a song....=]

..pOEtik..

I love that its cute keep writing

Wow thats really good, i love how its a poem turned into a songg

I really liked it. It's definetly the best song/poem I've ever heard. 5/5

THIS IS HELLA GUD