This is yet another exquisite piece from your side. Each stanza so unique in each sense and yet when one reaches the ending, you're so astounding by what was written.

"..A cyclone wrapped around my heart
..An ocean so deep it swallowed the stars
..But spit out the stones , so here I stand
..Feeling incomplete , in what I am ..."

^^I think this was the best part of the entire poem. It stood out the most and the choice of words just added immensely to the feelings behind this poem.

Excellent work! 5/5

Very tragic but beautifully written. Interesting poem!

Damn,,
That was something...
I like ervery stanza, every line, every word.
Deep, emotional and beautiful.

All the best,,
Take care.