Tat was a grreat write like ur other writes..

Keep it uip

Best wishz... Karan

I can't remember the last time i tried reading a poem under miscellaneous category.It was nicely written, though the meaning is common still you manage to describe differently from the usual poems that i've read before. the emotion is vividly sad. keep it up!

This is very interesting it told me a story, but at the same time like wow I don't know how to explain it. I guess it was like my Brain just took to it congrads!!! XD

Amazing write! so thought provoking! wonderful metaphors you've used. so neatly constructed! a brilliant poem!

Line 5 "as Rapunzel's tress" Is a thought perhaps.
Still the metre/rhythm disrupts the flow.