The fights the go on at home
--i believe "the" should be "that"
Or i might just crumble out me out into dark
engulfed in my own darkness
--fav. part
good poem

Omg i really like this poem it shows me

Omg i really like this poem it shows me

I really like this poem

I loved it! i could really relate

Very good i can relate completely i was there once too

The tears are clouding up my vision. That is so incredible. I loved ever letter in it.

Speechless, as always, after reading the best poems. Brilliant template for writing the poem.

SWEET I LIKE IT EVEN ID IT TIZ SAD IT TIZ GOOD!!!!! 10/5

Wow, i can totally relate 5/5

You show such promise with your writting keep up the good luck!!! this one blew my mind!!!