And end you life
i believe "you" should be your

there you stand, just laughing,
laughing
cause you ripped out my heart
--love that part

5/5

I liked it it was really eye capturing

I reaaally like this poem! it's got all the good stuff in there. good choice of words, the added emotions, really sucks you in and won't let you go until you've read it like four times. brilliant!!

Very good, 5/5 i loved it, such strong emotions

Sweet love it vary kool yet vary angrey and hurtful KOOL!!! xD 10/5

The guy i'm getting over was technically never mine...but this p03m....its brilliant and justs grabs you so that ur remembering all that pain again...but then u realize that you're not the only one going through this agony....good work...i'd like to read more of your work

This is also a very good piece you can feel your intensity and emotions through your words!!!! 5/5

Good poem that I believe many can relate to.
Rhyming and structure were also good and the message was clear so its a win =)

Wow great i like it