It was a really goodpoem i mean i really liked it if u want to check out my poem its called one tear its very short lol but good job

Very good and powerful! loved it!

Tat was a lovely dedication... keep it up...

Best wishz... Karan

Loved it, great poem. Beautifully written.

"I hold my heart in my hand
A mournful cry failed to escape my land
I surrender to the overwhelming power,
knowing I've lost my battle
Though I love you, I'll let go
I'll never fulfill thy desire..."

The ending is perfect.

I really enjoyed reading this piece you have penned.

I hold my heart in my hand
A mournful cry failed to escape my land
I surrender to the overwhelming power,
knowing I've lost my battle
Though I love you, I'll let go
I'll never fulfill thy desire...

These are my favorite lnes.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy