by XxHiis BooxX
I like it alot and sometimes the reason wy i guy don't want somethign more than friendship is b/c they don't wunna ruin it by dating you.. |
by shivali
A very beautiful compostion.. |
by StandStill
Hey there. ^.^ |
by mitch
It is a really cute poem, I loved it. I hope you write more ;) I'll be looking out for the next one. |
by Rachel RTVW
Lacks flow and all of your rhyming is forced and cliche. |
I found this poem abit too cute for me |
That's really cute i can totally relate to this poem, and girl this happens to the best of us. |
by XxHiis BooxX
AMAZING POEM..and WHO told u r not good at it..if u don't mine me asking? 5/5 great job |
That was a great poem the only thing that threw me off was the very ending. but i love the emotion you give, and how you expressed how he made you felt i could feel everything in the poem. |
"Running and skipping for days on end, |