Wonderfully written... good imagery...starting the poem with the lady in front of the bus is really nice...
and ending the next part with

"Even if the morrow is barren of promises
Nothing shall forestall my return "

is amazing...

very well written...

good word choice..

keep writing..

It was amazing nice metaphors and imagery I lyked this one 5/5 good job ",

I was very intrigued from the very first line..
and it continued throughout this very well crafted piece...i dwell more on the emotion i get from a poem more than trying to interpret the message, and i was truly moved by this...you're descriptions were so vivid that just for a second i thought i could see through the woman's eyes...
so well done..
john

Great poem, it's been so long since i last read a poem that comprises simplicity with an inspiring and emotional meaning..