That was very touching,
i really like it, defanitly a 5/5!

-mandy :)

Great poem! i dont think you've writen a poem i didnt enjoy reading! 5/5 i love ur work!
Love Love xo

I love all of your poems!
your great!
i like this poem alot!
Great Job!
XxAshleyxX

Really good poem!
very well written + this part really catches the eye

"Just want to find someone
Who can make all my broken pieces fit."

5/5 Great poem :)!

Great poem 5.5

:)

Wow... Good... really good. I loved your description of this poem. Very well written... Very simple yet so thoughtful. I loved the originality of this poem and the concept.