Comments : Wish upon the moon

  • 15 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Awww omg this poem was wonderful. Very sad at the end tho.

    But then he turned his face away
    and slowly whispered into my ears
    That he could never love me back
    the way I love him..
    "Never could he love me back
    the way I love him..."

    ^^^THis stanza caught my heart. 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 15 years ago

    by dandelion

    ANg pANget ng poems mu..joke

  • 15 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    That was so sweet
    really liked all it all just -ends- suddenly

    **For a moment..
    Hearts stopped beating..
    Trees stopped swaying..
    Crickets stopped chirping..
    And the moonlight was fading
    As the heavens started crying..**

    everything just stops, life in a -pause-
    well written n_n keep writing