Wowwwwww,this is so amazing ,mohamed...
and I liked this stanza a lot
Her heart is filled with fright
Her face is covered with a veil
All what she sees is a wicked fight
Between the truth and all what is real

I really admire the way u wrote it..so keep writin and keep it up5/5..

What a beautiful poem about a beautiful love! This poem sheds light on the truth of every situation in life. Great Job!

Though no one can see your angelic face
I have it pictured deep inside
Give me your hand, together we stand
Together we shall win the fight

Beautiful ! simply beautiful...

Awsome poem and very expressive .
i luv it and the way how u express urself .
well done

You express yourself very well and those so much emotion in it your a great writer keep it up

Maze....welcome back
a very nice return, I love the poem & mostly the title :)
Keep goin

Wow !! what a wonderful piece. Written with amazing descriptions.

"Am I in love?" whispered my heart
How can she feel my yearning?
Trapped, enslaved, and torn apart
In a fire of shame she is burning"

Great usage of words.
One of my favorites 5/5

Her heart is filled with fright
Her face is covered with a veil
=> Maash'allah.. :)

Her heart pounds with fury and rage
She silently cries an ocean of tears
=> I really love your expression.

I have been seeing her grow stronger
Captivating all my senses of sanity
A gaze into her seductive eyes
Is a new dimension of divine serenity

"Am I in love?" whispered my heart
How can she feel my yearning?
Trapped, enslaved, and torn apart
In a fire of shame she is burning
=> This is awesome...really awesome. I am impressed.

Though no one can see your angelic face
I have it pictured deep inside
Give me your hand, together we stand
Together we shall win the fight

=> Wow...What a love story who have painted in here...Excellent... I really really like this poem of yours...

Keep it up!

Meshaalah. I love this poem and the flow of it is very good.

Very deep and emotional and in great details mashallah

welldone

very good flow ....

You wrote this one?...wow
so amazing
very strong and emotional words i liked it alot
the feelings were very true and powerful

excellent work

'Am I in love?" whispered my heart
How can she feel my yearning?
Trapped, enslaved, and torn apart
In a fire of shame she is burning'

Interesting poem, great rythmn and feels real-too, not many poems have this type of tension. Is it based on real experience?

MashaAllah

I listened to you and read this poem, and i really like it. It paints a picture beautifully, and tells it how it is (unfortunately). Great job. I just love this poem. :) 5/5!!
-Kim

OMGGGGGG !!!!!!!!

The title itself is soooooo amazing..

This might be one of the best poems that I have ever read :)

Woooow wooooow woooooooooooow !!!

Its a 5/5 no doubt ..