Comments : Never

  • 15 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow that poem was amazing the flow and everything was just perfect.

    Never say "I love you"
    If you don't really care.
    Never talk about my feelings
    If they aren't really there.
    **i love that part because i can relate to it so well.

    Never hold my hand
    If your gonna brake my heart.
    Nevere say your going yo
    If you don't plan to start.
    **well stated, it goes really well with the poem.

    Never look into my eyes
    If all you do is lie.
    Never say 'Hi'
    If you really mean "Goodbye"
    **i think this stanza is the part i love the most. i really like the way that worded that.

    If you really mean forever
    then say you will try.
    Never say forever
    cause forever makes me cry.
    **This part just sums it up wonderfully. I really like this poem keep up the good work. a definite 5!

  • 15 years ago

    by Spiker 03

    Okay. really liked this one. Love isnt just a word to "throw" around. We should only say it when its meant. 5/5 luv always~~

  • 15 years ago

    by Mackenzie

    Okay. wow.
    it's like you took the words right out of my heart. i love it.. .5/5.

    great job&&keep it up.
    much love,
    mac.<3
    [.just.another.silly.teenage.girl.]

  • 15 years ago

    by Kevin

    Very nice flow. its a good one..