Aww that was cute. u did really good putting ur emotion into it. even thouh it didnt 'flow' or w/e it still turned out good! im sorry u had to that, sometimes though u have to do what u have to do for the better of the other person,if u truly love em. nice write keep it up. 5/5 always
Kate~LSB23

AWW I LIKE HOW YEWH EXPRESS UR FEELINGS
N SAYIN U CANT SEE UR SELF WIT OUT HIM I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE ITS MI FAVORITE

Meghan,
leaving a loved one is never easy. Writing down your feelings for your boyfriend in this way must have helped you too.

The poem tells the story well with fair structure, flow and rhyme.

Technically, there are things you could change, but it could detract from the obvious message.

Keep writing.

Michael

That is really good...it sounded like you put your heart into it...well done and sorry that you had to break up with him..

Loved it :)

Sad and awesome! Its hard to tell which part i like the most the whole poem is great!

Check out mine too if u like.

Sad and awesome! Its hard to tell which part i like the most the whole poem is great!

Check out mine too if u like.

I like how it seemed like you were upset about but still trying to make sure he know that yoiu missed him and that you loved him
good job 4.5/5
=)

I really like this, i think it hits the nail on the head when it comes to painful relationships and everyone can relate to it bc i dont think theres anyone that can say they havent been thru something close to that....but really great job, i really liked it and can relate to it!!!

Such a good poem babe
i mean like i wouldn't change a thing
the flow is great and rhyming pules it together!
amazing job sweetie ! <33 5/5

Aww this is a really good poem for just writing it in class u must be really good to that so quickly with so much emotion into it as well, good job. And to the returing the favor thing, u can if u want, since u commented 2 of my poems already thanks!

Very good.
you can really feel the emotion.
:)
nice job.

Pretty sad...but loaded with emotions...i love the sense in it!!! really good worrk...even tho it's done in class...lol

This is amazing I love it
You are an amazing poet
way better then me

This is amazing I love it
You are an amazing poet
way better then me

That was really nice, I can totally relate to this. I think you did a great job with this poem its just simple but full of emotions.

This was a very good poem...good work. 5/5

That was really good.. I liked it alot.. You explained how u were and are feeling.. Very good.. Keep up the great work

Wow. i love this poem it has so much insight. its amazing xoxox

I loved this poem. I think you are very talanted. 5/5 for sure. keep it up and don't lose faith. :)
If you want to talk, i'm here.
xo
ariel