Comments : What you want

  • 15 years ago

    by Goodbye

    I love this poem because it has so much emotions... I might be wrong but I assume when you love someone...you give all your heart to him... Put yourself complitely in the game...

    What fascinates and pleases me is how you describe

    Take my life from me, take it and run,
    For the peace I seek cannot be found in life,
    Take her skin and touch it as if it were your last,
    Kiss her lips as if yours would not be safe on another set,
    Love her as if your every breath meant another for her.
    After all it's what YOU want!

    So much passion. I really wish someone would love me one day the way you describe.