Wow lisa, this poem is amazing especially for ur first attempt at one. i love it! keep up the good work my dear!
a definite 5!

Awe great job

Wow for your first attempt at a love poem its great!!!
i love it!!!!

keep up the great work an take care

xoxo

Another great poem...its beautiful...keep up the great work

I liked it...very good for a first attempt at a love poem too!!

keep it up...

p.s. i love the last stanza...