I truely feel for you poem.. I love it. Keep writing.

Amber, this is excellently structured. Some may not like the repetiveness of the 'In the' or the 'turmoil's'..I on the other hand love them. They really drum this intense love home for me, making me believe every ounce of emotion you poured into this!

Well done

Michael

Again amber this absolutely beautiful! a really soft and passionat e poem i really loved it =D
xXx

I loved it, I love all your work,It was a really pretty poems, easy to read and to sink in.
Your pdl x