This is a very well written poem. A nice flow and good rhythm. I also liked the description... Well done!

Tat was lovely...

Good first poem, Keep it up..

Best wishz... Karan

Amazing...keep it coming!

I really liked ur poem such a nice feelings.. u realy done well nice to read this poem... i can say this is the poem of the day 5/5

Wow,omg.I am really speechless.It was a wonderul piece and it was really delicate and the words were so lovely.I really loved it.
keep up the good work plz.5\5.

Great job , i like it too much , plz keep up & i am waiting for more poems ; good luck