Wow very well written!
I really liked this one!
keep it up!

Thanks your poems are great 2 :)

Thats so sad.
but so so good.
once again a great piece :)

Oh. My God. You're amazing! The feeling is astonishing! It's so well.. put. I felt it. I know it now. It made me think of so many things in my own life. It's a talent, to be able to make the reader feel what you're feeling so intensely. I hope you post another soon.
-Krystal[:

Oh, and I guess you just inspired this quote..
"Impossible that time keeps ticking, but somehow it does. But not fast enough. No; not nearly fast enough."

He loves her
She loves him
And someday, soon
They'll be together again

absolutely love it, great poem and very emotional

Wow, this poem is so true... which is weird, but it is still true.