Cant believe am the first to comment, that was really nice. Loved it esp. the last part.

"Hope and faith slowly decays
As you think your life has come to an end
Youre crying, but your tears dont fall
Whisper your name, but not able to call"

Its really sad but beautiful.
Good job.

Enjoyed the poem thoroughly. It's a well described feelings through a poem. Liked it... flows nicely!