How adorable poem is that...You feel yourself a bit fool but that is all love sometimes do...You feel there is hope...You are begging for a chance to get that hope...That soooo...new love... So happy feelings..You are flying above clouds...so sweet...so sweet.. :D

Sumtimes life surprises u.... So nicely explained....

Good... keep it up

Best wishz... Karan

'I'll gladly be a fool for you.
sometimes life surprises you.'
This is a really sweet line! I really like it. Buuut--this line is a bit awkward (to me)
'I'm praying just to keep being odd.'
I kind of feel like it's the child of necessity for rhyme. I dunno. I like the poem in all though! The repitition is really very becoming for it...great job!

This is simple and nice...i can even sing this..lol