I love it. To me it sounds like a person who was in love with someone but was always scared to tell that person that he/she loved them. It shows me that no matter what there is always someone out there for all of us. Thank you! It was a beautiful poem!

The thought driving this piece is wonderful but your metre is so inconsistent that it makes it a difficult read. I am sure the metre could be smoothed with a bit of editing. but I do like the thought you express.
As always only an opinion.

"Tears streamed down while I remembered a happier day"
-Obviously tears are streaming down your face. I loved how you didn't say.. "Tears streamed down my face.".. I can definatly tell you realize that the readers can infer something liek that without you saying it. :]

"I never let you know that I would have loved to kindle the old flame"
-Shouldn't it be re-kindle the old flame? Just a guess?

"I treasure to this day each smile, you gave me, as your memory yet lingers"
-Hmm.. I don't think a comma is needed after smile.

"You still live inside of me, my dear friend, right here in my poetic heart
Life, nor death, could separate us and wild horses couldn't pull us apart"

^ Your last two lines were by far the best. They were my favorite =) Awesome writing!

Overall, awesome job. I loved the rhyming, that made the poem flow real nice! I love the title also! =) 5/5. Keep it up.

Your last line was fascinating

Life, nor death, could separate us and wild horses couldn't pull us apart

im sorry if you truly had this loss nice poem 4/5

Beautiful love poem you have here! I could truly feel the passion you expressed to this person.

"There were many there that love you, and you know I 'm one"
^This sentence didn't flow well for me. The way the words are put in order doesn't really work for me. Try reading over it and I know you can make the corrections it needs.

"It seems now that the time we spent together slipped through my fingers
I treasure to this day each smile, you gave me, as your memory yet lingers"
^Oh how much I adored these lines! It was filled with such love and beauty that I read over it a couple of times and each time I read it, I smiled although it was about heartbreak and losing the person.. The fact the emotions felt so true and beautiful it left me speechless.

Wonderful poem you have here that I truly enjoyed reading.
Well done *5/5*

Oh wow...
It means A lot for you to tell me my poems are good.
yours are amazing
beautiful poem
i love this.

Beautiful job, your work continues to amaze me. so much emotion and feeling. 5/5 wonderful.

I enjoyed this one the most because you took a risk with the structure and length of the lines but you succeeded at creating an excellent piece. The use of Judas is well done, it heightens emotions and lets people easily relate to the temptations that Judas faced. You did well with the metaphors and relations. I enjoyed it alot. 5/5