by XxHiis BooxX
| I like this poem very diff...strong voice to this poem as well..5/5 ur poem is so fexcellent....o thats my word fexcellent..i like to make my own words sometimes...lol but anyways all in all a great poem | 
by withlove
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            I like the repetition of the line I'm invisible to everyone around me  |