It's a good poem

why do i find it so hard
to just smile once a day
--one day you will smile, a real smile

It was great. the flow was amazing. the words were perfect. n i say many ppl can relate to this. hiding our true emotions behind the mask n showing a smile to tell ppl we are okay but truly we are not. a very powerful poems u wrote here n ur first. awesome jbo! keep it up!
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

I like the flow, the style and just the poem in itself, 5/5. Em

Idk about structure and all of a proper poem but i know after reading it, i wasnt trying to figure it out.:) thats what i look for, a glimps in anothers mind.
about the poem itself, the word you used 'might' is the key. you have to have might to live for the 'might happen' lol

This was a very emotionally powerful write...excellent job 5/5

Life has its ups & downs... dont give up trying to be what u really want to be no matter of difficulties or pain u can face ... i feel that u have so beautiful smile dont hide it maybe the day u keep smiling all life's troubles will melt down .
i like ur poem alot & hope to read more & more of ur works .
well done 5/5

Great poem a first one to be proud of ... keep writing keep learning x 5/5