It is so personal It is touching. You have a talent. well you do to me. Im a teenager

Your words are very well chosen and structured to be felt to the utmost, using words like yearn, crave for, ...etc. may look either very not genuine and misplaced or look very true and BEAUTIFUL like the way they are placed in you poem ... simply amazing

That every day, more and more,
I'm falling deeply in love with you!

Allow me to point out my favorite part

A magnificent ending to a magnificent write

Keep on writing