It's an honor to comment on that one, amazing poem, amazing words, amazing IDEA,
Hope its heard

There once was an idea
to make the world a better place.
Where dreams and wishes came true
and children were always safe.
and every morning people gave a little
and every day was peaceful.
But it was just a dream and nothing more
that like the woman, died in vain.

Your endings amaze me

Loved the idea! a whole life just drawn
the ending is just wow. really twists everything.
loved it 5/5

Your talent really shines though in this piece, you have conveyed your messge brilliantly with the choice of words. and although the poem was long, it kept the reader wanting more, real good stuff.