Told them all i was fine, they all bought it.
don't think "i'm ok" will work with me.
-.-

Cant go back,
cant go forward
-I like this part, because of this misery you can't do anything but to grab on the blade!

I really liked this poem. It was short, sweet, and to the point. i liked how u were struggling with yourself giving us a view of where ur mind is while u wrote this. great job 5/5
~Forever Broken~

Nice poem with simple adjectives and few words you created a piece which comprises different emotions, feelings and situation.. like this one. keep it up!