Comments : Cry Of This Lonely Heart.

  • 11 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Loved the begining and the end of the poem:
    "The ache of this empty heart
    cries out so loud in the dark"
    then at the end a reminder of the begining:
    "still the aches of these empty heart
    searches for the signs of relief... "
    ...............
    "why we wonder what lies beneath that
    why asking for going back
    when we know things weren't right"

    these questions can only be answered by your own heart
    Allah bless you

  • 11 years ago

    by Boy

    A very nicel written poems.... nice work.... its so good 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Prasad B

    Good job, keep it up

    Tat was a nice 1...

    Best wishz 4 ur future writes 2 come....

    Rgds..Karan

  • 11 years ago

    by TARA

    VERY NICE

  • 11 years ago

    by chelsey

    OMG i love it wow i love it ur soooo sensitive :)