Loved the begining and the end of the poem:
"The ache of this empty heart
cries out so loud in the dark"
then at the end a reminder of the begining:
"still the aches of these empty heart
searches for the signs of relief... "
...............
"why we wonder what lies beneath that
why asking for going back
when we know things weren't right"

these questions can only be answered by your own heart
Allah bless you

A very nicel written poems.... nice work.... its so good 5/5

Good job, keep it up

Tat was a nice 1...

Best wishz 4 ur future writes 2 come....

Rgds..Karan

VERY NICE

OMG i love it wow i love it ur soooo sensitive :)