This is absolutley CRAZY!
its amazing what can happen to you when you are trippi non something....
the things you tend to see...
the places you go!
you did a great job of showing this..

XxAshleyxX

This is different, i've never seen anyone write something like this. But that is why i like it b/c it is so different. You did a good job.

I really could relate to youin this poem. drugs ae stereotyped to be the solvent to problems and are often seen as "glamarous' but its only when you become an addict (with out even realising) that you see the mundayne pain it offers.

Your dark side is magnificent, what an imagination. You write of things I can't really relate too and yet I find myself amazed.
Connie

Your dark side is magnificent, what an imagination. You write of things I can't really relate too and yet I find myself amazed.
Connie

Yes is deffinatly unique. Wow great job.

Your word choice is amazing. There is some vivid imagery as well as some amazing use of emotion. It has a very great example of rhyme scheme, though that was not neccesary. last but not least this has a great flow which is thanks to your fabulous beginning and leads to the extremely strong, creative ending.

This is a really good poem, it is different then what I have read before. But, you wrote it and it all seemed to make since