Heyy! i really like your poem lol, its simple, but good! :)

I like this poem very much(: Thanks for the comments.

Respectfully Edward's,
Cherish Rose.

Well i like the idea that you have written this poem in a straight foward manner.Well sometimes when we have on one else in our life, our lover becomes part of our life and u have depict tt clearly in ur poem.I also like the how you made the rhyme scheme goes ABA. Nicely done5/5

This poem is about a girl who has one love and no one else,but the love of her life beats her. she wants to leave but she can't which leaves her left with him unsure of life behind closed doors