Awesome write!
This was beautiful.
Great word choice, again. :]
It was a great piece.
Keep writing. You're doing great.
5/5.

Aww!!..i absolutly loved this!..the last stanza was my favorite! loved it!
great job! 5/5
Aly

Really like this poem. Its really rich in vocabulary and is very expressive. I like the title too, very well thought of and kinda draws you towards knowing whats in the poem. Really great keep up.

Really like this poem. Its really rich in vocabulary and is very expressive. I like the title too, very well thought of and kinda draws you towards knowing whats in the poem. Really great keep up.

You always happen to use the most amazing words in your poems which makes it refreshing to read from the same old same old. The power and meaning hidden behind your lines was flawless in expressing your deepest emotions. I truly did enjoy this piece. Well done *5/5*