Great poem here. Very meaningful and as you said, is truly heartfelt. You did such an excellent job in writing this piece and I thank you for sharing it. Regarding the last stanza, in my opinion, you should extend it a little bit in order to create a couple more verses. Or, as you have mentioned, you can create another poem with it, but extending it would be preferable.
Once again, great job and I look forward to reading more in the future.
Take care always.
Kristina

Thanks a lot Kristina, I praised ur comment and I thought about extending the second part too...I definetly will have to now. Thanks again!!

Beautiful..absolutely beautiful, cannot wait for the other one. Love, Tim

wow! hun, you did an amazing job on this poem! I absolutely loved it. I agree with kristina and tiffany and think you should extend the second part. it was beautifully written and i cant wait to see what you do with the second part!
*two thumbs up*
~LeAnNe
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good job that was great i realli lyked u obvously showed how much u care 4 the person ur writing about good job and keep up the good work ur very talented

Thanks everyone. Yes I am definetly trying to extend the 2nd part but im still not sure whether to keep it as one poem or not, i'll just decide once i get the 2nd part extended. I've just had a hectic couple of weeks and no time at all, sorry bout the delay I should have time to work on it soon. And thanks eveyone for reading, voting and commenting on it. You have no idea how much it means to me!!

beautiful, absolutly beautiful. it is one of the best love poems i have read on here. its very...true. thats what people want. great job!