To die inside is such an interesting thing to me nice poem short but sweet 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

-It's not your fault.
Because you weren't there.-
short true, aa there should be more. it has such a nice flow.
n_n nice poem keep writing

-I couldn't breathe.
I could feel my heart beating slower.
I could since that no one was around.-
ooooo loved that part! so much emotion and anger !
repeating - i could- just amplifies the feeling.

-But right now I'm only *dieing* inside.- ack lol mispelled there n_n
it's really good now! like really! so glad you wrote more!
5/5!!!! =P again lol