Dang i remember thoses days 10/10

I can feel emotions escaping this poem.

I know I do rhyming poems.
But I'm really glad you didn't rhyme this one.

This poem was almost as though.
You were crying.
Talking to your friend.

It's simple, straight forward.

Although,
I think you should change the title
Something more creative,
Something that doesn't give out so much, y'know?

Cuz at the very beginning,
I already knew what the ending would be.

Wow... said so simply and straight to the point. sometimes, that's how i feel around the guy i love. short, simple, amazing. i love how you made it just so simple. the simplicity of it all... you write it as though you don't want to live anymore, so you're just saying it to the entire world. just saying it. nothing more. i love it

5/5

Keep Writing, lovely
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Aw! How sad! I loved it. It was straight to the point, but still simple and sad all at the same time. You are truly a great poet. Keep up the good work! This one is definitely worth a 5! :)

Simple yet so touching...
very emotional...

'So I will just sit here and not say a word.
Since today he said he does not want me anymore. '

^^ these lines are so touching... beautifully written..

keep writing..

Aww this is straight from the heart.
i remember these days.
loving someone with all your heart,
then being played or just thrown away like you were nothing.
amazing job.
i loved the repitition you used in it.
and the choice of words.
5/5