Comments : My twenty year wife

  • 15 years ago

    by gracey grey

    We long so much for the word" love" to come simply and the fact that you ended your lines as you did is just wonderful.......It all sums up beautifully.

    "I love you and I'll love you for all eternity and a day"

    "Eternity "sounds good, but "a day" more is mindblowing!!!Your wife is very lucky and blessed having you .Bless you both.

    Best wishes,
    Grace

  • 15 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Another lucky poet to understand and enjoy the pains and pleasures of love. 20 years pass quickly and even quicker when the time becomes 40 and the flicker of eternity is right around the corner. a nice write and a nice flow of words from your poets pen. Peace