U r the awesome poet;)...I would never be able to express such an idea like u did here..

You see all the red roses turning to black
the headstones that used to say R.est I.n P.eace
now say R.emember I.n P.ain
remember how it used to be

Oh I liked this stanza so much,It is really so sad but so great...keep it up5/5..

You see all the red roses turning to black
the headstones that used to say R.est I.n P.eace
now say R.emember I.n P.ain
--dark,deep, powerful images
and your mommy used to tell you everything will be alright
well you know what
she lied
--fav. part
like the repitition, excellent flow
5/5

-R.est I.n P.eace
now say R.emember I.n P.ain-
that part was just awsome. such a great idea!