Comments : For you.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bert
    Welcome back :) I was so excited when I saw you had posted a new poem...and it is a beauty.

    In Winter, along the iced ponds
    It will be so good to walk together on dead leaves,
    and to look at the snow whirling with the wind,
    I shall have a soft spot for you.

    The imagery in each stanza is wonderful. Your love is shining from each word. I picked this sanza because I love the winter. I love how you have brought each season into this poem.

    I shall hear your voice,
    And read your so soft and tender letters,
    For ever my dear, for ever for life,
    I shall have much more than a soft spot for you.

    This last stanza ends this piece so well. How many fond moments we hold in our hearts for the one we love.

    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by debbylyn

    So romantic and beautiful Bert...full of vivid imagery of nature's finest displays set as a background to wonderful verses of love!

    "The sun will spatter Summer of its light,
    Gilding the crops for our future bread,
    And the heat haze will veil the skyline,
    I shall have a soft spot for you."

    ^Love these lines! awesome word choices and imagery!

    5/5 Take care, Debbie

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Vivid imagery in this sweet, romantic piece. I love the way you describe the seasons and convey how through all the seasons as they may change your love never will.......absolutely beautiful!

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Aww, such beauty and tenderness within these words! You did an amazing job, Bert:)
    Welcome back!

    Hugs,

    Ingrid