First let me say that before submitting your work proof read it. "Hight" should be "height" or "high", "fafraid" should be "afraid".
Second stanza the metre is off, try to work line three. I would drop "even", "built",change third line second stanzato something like "red bricks formed by words said", drop "and" and drop "To".
As always this is an opinion. I did like your idea here and think it could be worked into a nice write.