I enjoyed reading this one. It has a great flow and rhymes that helped emphasize the mood of the poem. It sort of felt calm to me, yet troubled by the concious reality. I feel like that a lot. Like I would rather stay sleeping forever and not have to worry about opening my eyes and what lies in front of them. I especially like the lines "So hum and tweedle/then stick in the needle" that create the image which is the title of this work. Very well done, darling.