I really liked this!
good job and keep it up!

(a few spelling errors) but thats about it!

Wonderful write... good word choice and wonderful metaphors used..

"Love ignored, warmth had gone, light darkened
Hate appeared, tears were shown, heart frightened
Trust, where did I ever gone wrong?
Trust, who could guess it would be so strong? "

^^ this very touching... and very beautifully writtn...

"Trust, where did I ever gone wrong?"
^^ thats one question that everyone ask at some point of time...

A good read...
keep writing..

I really enjoyed reading this poem, and i really hope you write more. I loved the metaphors, just awesome

Good write to me......
i liked the concept and the message you wanted to give.......
a good poem of substance.