Yes, time to move on... Face this world alone. Stand in your own feet. Learn to cope things alone. Move on...move on.. Next step. One more near becoming ADULT. I am still kid...even I have lived alone for years...

Nice poem.. True feelings.. I can relate... :)

It's a poem of...I dunno. It's got some good points. I like the bit of no more parents to watch you when you sleep, it's symbolic of a lot. I like it! (that really doesn't tell you anything, but anyway :P).....

I like the repitition and the way its just sort of a wake up call, but not really angry, just matter of fact