Bleh, I didn't see that you had a new poem. >.<

Anywho, this was wonderful, Kris. It's very sweet, but bitter at the same time. We never want to let go of the good things we've got. And this world sucks and tears it away from us anyway....

Tell me something true,
Tell me something pure and from the heart,
Give me back something to believe in,
Cause I'm not quite sure where to start.

^^ This stanza is so relatable to me, personally. It's just...i've lost a lot of the things i used to believe in. and everything seems so broken and shakey. But I'm hoping like hell that it gets better...

*hugs*
great piece. <3

Excellent rhyming flow and a very good choice of words.

=]

Wicked job i loved this poem, the atmosphere of the piece pulls you in and each stanza makes you want to keep reading on.
Your a very talented writter.

Very sad but also masterfully written at the same time.good job.5/5= )

This is a good poem, and I knw it sucks to b left in the past, bt always hope 4 the best!!

Beautiful.. very nice, well written & beautifully penned 5/5

Wonderful poem! Very deep and filled with emotion! 5/5

This is awesome writing.
strong emotions.
well done.

hope things are okay.

xx.

Wow so deep with emotions swhat passion so divine what a great writer are you! to put such tangled emotions into words it truly amazes me you such a beautiful talent let it for ver shine never stop writing! 5/5 xxx <33

This poem is sweet...keep it up

I don't want to be forgotten,
Not just one more thing lying in your past,
I'm not just another mistake,
Our friendship, at least has to last.

^^^^^This feeling of not wanting to let go I know so well and it means you really care for this person:)
A much beautiful poem, with great flow and good choice of words!

Take care,

Ingrid 5/5

Nice to read. it has a good flow and very interesting. not boring at all! i enjoyed it!

Nice poem, full of emotions and deep feelings. It is heartfelt and meaningful. Good job, keep it up.

Once again; really powerful, emotional piece, 5/5. Em xx