'For one of us was born a twin,
Yet not a soul knew which.'
haha, nice.
'And i was named him'
this line ought to be longer, it doesn't quite fit the rest of that stanza.
This is...limerick like. My favorite of what I've read from you so far. Still some mistakes that detract, but it's good, and light hearted. Nice.

I'm dissapointed with myself that I didn't notice that some of your poems were this way. Disregard my past comment.

That's for the actual author of it, Henry Sambrooke Leigh.

Please, Maida?