Good job with this one, gives a sad and lonely feeling, 5/5

A deep and emotional message here that is written, apparently, from the heart.
I think you could work on the metre in the first two stanzas. Perhaps "inner" rather then "only".
I presume the lower case "i" is to show how insignificant the person feels so I won't.....
The contractio "I'm" need an appostrophy.

The last verse is deffinatly my favorite, its so bold and direct. I admire you for this piece of writting.

I think everyone has felt this some time in their life.

Very well written, 5/5

There comes a point in everyones life when they feel like this. This poem is laced with feeling and power. Nicely done. 5/5