I really think this poem is full of real emotion!
If not you're hiding it well!
1 thing I do see that could be improve would be to put it in stanzas cause it's just in one big paragraph!
This poem reminds me of my first "love"
It really touches me heart because I know exactly how it feels... and how you think its exactly what you want..
Trust me There is something better out there!!
Thanks for the comment! It made my day :)