Ingrid, I really deeply felt this piece, the heartache, I know these feelings are very real, I can feel them, you've penned this as though it just flowed all out, heartfelt painful truth expressed.
I very much like the nice clear rhyming, suited this piece well with the rhythm.
Awesome piece Ingrid, big hugs to you
5/5

Beautiful piece so full of sadness and longing. The emotions flow from the words...

The imagery of the magnolia tree is beautiful...a pleasure to read Ingrid! Take care, Debbie

Ingrid
What a sad piece you have penned of a love lost.

Underneath the sweet Magnolia tree
is where I always pictured you and me
Two people close together, lost in love
For so long now this was all I could think of.

The imagery of this stanza is beautiful. Just longing for the one you love.

Underneath the sweet Magnolia tree
I hide from the world in order to feel free
Laying myself to rest ,crying bitter tears
Left alone empty handed with all my doubts and fears.

How heartbreaking. This brings tears to my eyes.
Great job!
Love Cindy